The Grumpy Weather
Grumpy clouds,
mad as monster with a knife in his hands
across Cutts Road.
A thundring roar in the sky
like a hammer hitting the ground
along Woodbury Street.
The arrows of rain
scary like a spider smiling
along North Street.
The violent hurricane
strong as an ox
on Kedelston Drive.
The hammering cold rain
as tough as a bear
on Waterloo Road.
By Hajar Algarni.
Room 3 Russley School
Lovely poem Hajar. I can just imagine a violent storm descending upon Russley School. Please could you write one about fine weather now? We could do with some warmer weather again!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Hajar, our favourite part is when you mention all the street names.
ReplyDeleteLove your poem
ReplyDeleteGood job Hajar loved the poem keep it up
ReplyDeleteI like your poem Hajar.
ReplyDeleteI really like your line about the arrows of rain. Great poem.
ReplyDeleteHi, thanks for all the comments.
ReplyDeleteCan I please know whos the anonyymous and mrs ward i will try to do a nother poem about good weather .
COOL poem! I like it!
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